Sunday 7 December 2008

First four chapters of my new book

These are the first four chapters of my book. ill upload two chapters a week so here you go.

My view of Digimon

Epilogue

Hi my names Neil.

This story is about my adventure in the digital world I hope you enjoy it. N.a.m

p.s I will tell you what the digimons profile is. N.a.m


Chapter 1

The beginning


It all began on a very hot day last summer I was chilling out in the backyard on my own when something fell out of the sky and landed right in front of me! Then I saw something I recognized. A digivice! Just floating there then I did what any kid would do I took it then it got really weird it was like a big wave just appeared in my backyard and then split in half and I got sucked in! I must have been knocked out because when I opened my eyes there was a pink thing and a brown thing bouncing on me!



Chapter 2

The digital world


They kept on bouncing on me and kept on shouting my name and it was starting to get annoying so I shouted “OK so you know my name what’s yours?”

Tokomon” said one "and I'm kokomon"said the other “where am I” I said “your in the digital world on hope island its quite small since it broke of a bigger island” said Tokomon.

I was wondering what to do next I thought I should look around “is there any landmarks around here” I asked “there’s a beach behind you that’s a landmark” said kokomon. So we made our way to the beach when we saw a big bag. We went over to it and opened it it was full to the brim with food and it had a pocket full of packets on the front it said digimon food the packet was full of bananas and other strange fruits at that moment I heard a voice it said “you have gained new powers by entering this world but you are not the only person to enter this world there are other kids here I will meet you in the future but until then goodbye” and it went away!

We herd a rumbling and turned around and we saw a shellmon.

Profile: A shellmon is a digimon which gets angry for no reason!

Tokomon and kokomon tried to hit it with these pink bubbles but that didn’t work and the shellmon was just about to get me when the best thing ever happened something I will never forget!




Chapter 3

Digivolution



I was just about to get attacked when Tokomon and Kokomon digivolved into two new digimon a Patamon but this was no ordinary Patamon it was a yellow Patamon it used boom bubble to blow that shellmon back a bit then i turned round to where kokomon used to be and there was a lopmon it used tiny twister and it blew shellmon away then we got the bag and got out of there.

So you digivolved right?” I said “yep” said Patamon “then why aren’t you orange?” I asked “Digimon aren’t always the same colour Neil” said Patamon well lopmon is his brown like normal "lets just decide what were going to do" said lopmon.

Should we explore the island a bit more and find some where to sleep” I asked "we should probably find somwhere to sleep"said lopmon “yes lets find some where to sleep” said Patamon “oh by the way here’s your tag and crest” said Patamon “thanks” I said “now lets find somewhere to sleep" we ended up finding a house a old man came out and said “who is it oh its you” he sounded exactly like the voice I heard on the beach “my names Chris” said the old man “I heard you on the beach earlier I knew about the other kids but what was all that rubbish about the powers about?” I asked “you haven’t found out about your powers yet OK burn down that tree without talking” said Chris “ill give it a go” I said.

So I stared at the tree and thought of it burning and suddenly it was on fire so then I thought of it being put out with water and a big blob of water appeared above it and then fell on the tree and the fire was put out “wow!” said Patamon "cool" said lopmon “can we stay at yours tonight Chris” I asked “yes” said Chris so we stayed at Chris’s for the night and he had really comfy beds.

We decided that the next day we would go to the icy mountains of Hope Island!




Chapter 4

Ice Mountain



So we had our breakfast and left Chris’s house and made our way to ice mountain you can guess what its like just by the name but ill tell you anyway at the bottom and middle there’s snow but at the top there’s just ice so its basically imposable at the top to climb any higher but we were going to give it a try.

So we had made it to the middle of the mountain when we saw a fridgemon with a black gear in it!

Profile: A fridgemon is an ice type digimon it is a very kind digimon.

Patamon tried to use boom bubble to get the black gear out but it didn’t work!

then lopmon used tiny twister but that didnt work either!

Fridgemon jumped up to the icy part of the mountain we tried to run up to the top of the mountain but I ended up slipping and falling of the mountain!

That’s when Patamon digivolved into……………………Angemon!

Angemon caught me and then used hand of faith and broke the black gear.

Sorry about that but I had a black gear in my back” said fridgemon “its okay” said Angemon “we know it wasn’t your fault” and we waved goodbye as Angemon flew us both over ice mountain and down on the other side we walked for a bit and then there was a big flash of light and Angemon dedigivolved into Patamon and then we walked into a desert I looked around the desert went on for miles in every direction!




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